is this a good way to start an essay about genetic engineering?

jammm asked:


“In this growing era of modern technology, questions have arisen regarding ethics, moral code, and or beneficial effects; of these comes one of the most argued about topic,—besides abortion—genetic engineering/ research.” If not, i would appreciate it if you could revise it in any way to make it more satisfactory. btw, i am a freshman in highschool Thanks

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